Art Writing & Editing


I didn’t find and grammatical errors. She writes very fluently and makes it easy for the reader to follow. She truly expresses herself in her blog. It seemed that she was very excited to use snapchat towards her grade. I liked how she said it was a struggle to add classmates because the lack of filtration she has on snapchat.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading her piece. She expressed the topic very smoothly and added her input at the correct time. Again I really liked the honesty she shared by saying how it was hard to add classmates because of her having no filter. I honestly couldn’t tell her how to improve that blog post because it was written very well. Good Job.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s